DDshoeshowz ([info]ddshoeshowz) wrote,
@ 2008-03-27 16:54:00
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Book Review
Well despite your overwhelming amount of help (ie: nada), I've written my own review to D.F. Whipple's novel, Snooker Glen.

Of course, I have an obligation seeing as I'm his friend and all. But I'm quite unsure as to how to write a review (at least in my own opinion). So, as I post it on Amazon.com, I was wondering if any of you would read over this and see that I'm not too obvious in my admiration for this man or harsh. If I'm too easy on him, it would look like he told me to write it (which he did, but that's besides the point). If I'm too  harsh, it'll make the book look bad and people may reconsider - and yes, the reviews actually do matter. Last time I posted, his sales went up; at least so far as he told me.

Also, I realize that this paragraph has horrible punctuation abuse. So, anyway, here it is:

D.F. Whipple has demonstrated once again that not only is he an impeccable eyewitness of the human condition, that not only is he an accomplished author deserving of great merit, and that not only can he compose a craftily arranged story of wide, multi-faceted themes, but he can do it all with a subtle grace that belies the great intensity broiling beneath the depths of his work.

I must admit, as a high school student greatly interested in the literary arts, I am left with a feeling hardly assessable after reading a Whipple book. The characters, ideas; the tale itself seems unable to lie contently within the pages that Whipple has so masterfully filled. There is not a word that appears haphazardly thrown in or written in as "padding". The characters lives don't end by the time one has read through to the back cover. Nor were they started on the first page; instead one gets the feeling that we are merely the observers of these people's lives who we can only begin to grasp. As in his previous novel, the story is never brought to a conclusive end. This comes not through any lack of lucidity on the author's part: no, indeed this arises more to the fact that what Whipple has constructed within the three-hundred odd pages is a large, allegorical mirror upon which we are to view ourselves.

Yes, there are the more universal themes here dealing with immigration that never fall to bland assumptions, conclusions, or otherwise clichéd and stereotyped ends. However, where some readers may not connect to such global themes (which remains unlikely - Whipple allows no connection, large or small, communal or individual to remain insignificant; we as readers are shown the impact of our moral obligations through his characters on a both a restricted and wide scale) he sticks to situations on which we all can connect: what mother has not fretted over the well-being of her own children? When have people not been incited to anger when an outside threat closes in?

It is interesting to note, though, that the truth becomes most clear in the character's greatest struggles. These "scenes" - if you will - usually involve an almost dream-like, hallucinatory sequence of events. It appears that Whipple is trying to tell us that we (as human creatures) have known the truth all along but do not reach realization until our doubts, our self-imposed trials, choke out all other knowns and only the ultimatum - that thing which we so try to ignore - becomes clear even (or especially) as all else falls apart.

Any of those who have read Whipple's first novel, Shadow Fields, will recognize such masterful tactics. You will not be disappointed with this great selection; not only does it display a wide range of interests (the setting is almost completely removed from the large corporations dominating his early novel) but it also documents a maturing style of this author who so far has only demonstrated genuine enthusiasm and skill for his art. Not to discredit his early work by any means, but I left this one feeling more satisfied with the depth with which he explored his world. If any of you are to recall my previous review, you would find this to be a nit-pick of mine (I wouldn't call it a complaint, I enjoyed that book far too much to have a complaint). This time around, however, I left a very satisfied, very thoughtful reader.

And I left, perhaps, just a little bit more interested and compassionate about my fellow man. When a book can do that to you, you most certainly know you have something a little bit more than a "fireside read" on your hands.

I highly recommend this book to any and all interested. I even recommend it to any who may not be interested; you will be surprised at how easily you will slip into the world of Snooker Glen and how very hard it is to leave it.


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[info]xmchord
2008-03-27 09:26 pm UTC (link)
I don't think that a glowing review means that you were coerced into writing it, as you seem to state above. If the review boiled down to "Gee, that was great. Y'all should buy it." Then I could see what you are talking about, but any review that attempts to figure out what the source is truly about shows time and effort, thus your own ideas and not that of your friends.

So shut the hell up next time.

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[info]ddshoeshowz
2008-03-27 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, that alleviates some of my fears about the piece. Especially with it coming off bland/forced.

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[info]xmchord
2008-03-27 09:37 pm UTC (link)
I don't think that a glowing review means that you were coerced into writing it, as you seem to state above. If the review boiled down to "Gee, that was great. Y'all should buy it." Then I could see what you are talking about, but any review that attempts to figure out what the source is truly about shows time and effort, thus your own ideas and not that of your friends.

So shut the hell up next time.

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[info]treesahquiche
2008-03-27 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Okay, so first, it's too long. I know people looking for books on Amazons are at least semi-literate, but they've got enough cash and enough options to move on if the book description hasn't enticed them enough and if the reviews are tl;dr.

Secondly, don't mention that you're a high school student. Seriously, that kills all your merit. Only mention that you're a high school student if the book's target audience is young adults, adolescents, and/or college-age people.

Thirdly, your language is pretentious and flowery, and there are too many punctuational embellishes. I know that that style appeals to some people and will entice some people to read it, and it does make you sound erudite. However, what most Amazon books browsers -- me included -- want to hear (or read) is that they don't have to smarten themselves considerably or put on their pretentious academia fez cap to enjoy this book, that they can come how they are and pick it up. Frankness and conciseness are your friends when writing an Amazon user review; the style you've used is more reserved for commissioned literature reviews in fashionably avant-garde magazines.

In that same vein, you could also probably compress your comparison of Shadow Fields and Snooker Glen. The comparison is important, but the sheer volume dedicated to it is a bit much.

Do you remember talking to me about Mr. Whipple's books in our AP English class? You didn't sound like this review, and yet you made his books sound so much more interesting. Frankness and conciseness give things an immediacy and urgency and "Hey, I def. need to pick this up!" that prosaic language is unable to give. Why do more people pick up E. L. Konigsburg than they do Aleksandr Pushkin? Well, genre and cultural differences aside, it's because people look at Aleksandr Pushkin in a more laconic, academic light than they do E. L. Konigsburg.

Also, on top of the almost-purple diction, you gush praise, most of it padded with empty, extraneous sentiments. Don't be too extreme in your good opinion and gushiness -- if you raise people's expectations too much, and they find it doesn't meet their expectations, your review gets graded as "unhelpful" and that hurts the product's rank.

I like your review, and I wholly appreciate what you're trying to say -- I've read lots of books that made me feel the same way. I just think that you need to connect with your audience a bit more. And maybe not ramble so much.

My advice is, of course, ironic, because I've rambled a lot in this comment.

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[info]ddshoeshowz
2008-03-27 09:45 pm UTC (link)
I'm very glad to see how harsh you are with this. I'll try to address every point that you brought up. If I disagree with one, however, don't think that means that I didn't take it into careful consideration; I respect you too much to disregard your opinion like that.

1: You're right, it is too long. I had an inkling that it may be - however one of the reviews on there is of somewhat equal length so I fell a bit better about that. But I will definitely try to cut out whatever just seems to be extraneous.

2: He actually wanted me to say that I'm a high school student. His books are being incorporated into tutoring programs and the such and he said that people interested in his work want to know who/what type of demo graphs are attracted to his work. Normally I wouldn't mention such a thing, but I'm only doing it at his request.

3:I'll definitely cut down on the prose. Your probably right; I'm attempting to appeal to a crowd that just isn't there.

And no, I don't think you've rambled at all. You've provided me with helpful advice that I very much appreciate. Believe me, I do. So, now that you've (graciously) helped me out with this, I'll go back to rewriting. I'm not sure if I'm going to repost it because I don't think that I need to torture you again with revising my work, but I just have to say again: THANK YOU!

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