DDshoeshowz ([info]ddshoeshowz) wrote,
@ 2008-04-12 20:23:00
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Work
Second chapter up! Yay!

God, it was more work than I intended. Also, why can't I write this at any other time than during class period?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4175589/2/Good_Luck_Has_Its_Storms

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[info]xmchord
2008-04-13 12:52 am UTC (link)
The ending was magnificent and really pulled the story through. As always, your descriptions are brilliant and make the reading enjoyable, however this time around I felt that at there was a bit of confusion as to what was being described. I surely enjoyed it but there were some areas I think that could be tightened.

I'll go over this with you later. I always thought that typing was a bit informal.

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[info]ddshoeshowz
2008-04-13 02:32 pm UTC (link)
Same, I rather prefer talking face to face. But I thank you for the interest!

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